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I found his body in the sublevel reacter room, i heard his body fall to the ground as soon as i entered--[[Special:Contributions/93.96.201.245|93.96.201.245]] 19:13, October 13, 2009 (UTC) |
I found his body in the sublevel reacter room, i heard his body fall to the ground as soon as i entered--[[Special:Contributions/93.96.201.245|93.96.201.245]] 19:13, October 13, 2009 (UTC) |
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Most of what I removed was empty wordage and speculative extrapolation. I also replaced some quest-specific info with clear and organized sections with links to appropriate quests. This was not wanton deletion of content. |
Most of what I removed was empty wordage and speculative extrapolation. I also replaced some quest-specific info with clear and organized sections with links to appropriate quests. This was not wanton deletion of content. |
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Revision as of 22:27, 17 December 2009
References plz
How do we know his name is Alphonse? Where is it mentioned in-game? Pika132 23:49, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
- Stanley Armstrong mentions it ("This vault's been going to pot ever since that young Alphonse took over."). It's also mentioned in the official guide. Ausir 23:54, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
- How do we know he's "insecure" and that he "overreacts?" These seem to be the opinions of the author more than anything that comes from the game itself; if it is the opinion of Character X that this person exhibits qualities Y and Z, then it should say so. The speculation in this article really sets it apart from most of the others I've seen - and not in a good way.
- If there is in-game content supporting all the rampant speculation in this article, it should be referenced. --Oferphuxake 20:47, 19 March 2009 (UTC)
wierd
One time near the end of the Escape quest his head started to spin and then he was falling down under the ground though this only happened once an never happened again.Flaming skull of heaven 15:38, September 1, 2009 (UTC)flaming skull of heaven
The overseer dead
I found his body in the sublevel reacter room, i heard his body fall to the ground as soon as i entered--93.96.201.245 19:13, October 13, 2009 (UTC)
Rewritten
Most of what I removed was empty wordage and speculative extrapolation. I also replaced some quest-specific info with clear and organized sections with links to appropriate quests. This was not wanton deletion of content.
I would welcome a discussion of specific points. I'm also quite open to new additions of actual information to the article. But, as it was before my rewriting, it was mostly a wall of text in which it difficult to find information.--Gothemasticator 22:22, December 17, 2009 (UTC)